Thursday, February 20, 2014

Fantasy

One day there was a turtle named Fred. He was just like any other turtle except he had superpowers! He could stretch out for miles and he could fly! He could talk and change into other things and other people do anything that the other turtles could do and more. He was the happiest turtle until his owner was moving to Russia and he had to leave all his turtles behind. The boy begged and begged his parents, but still it was a no. When the boy left in a taxi, Fred flew after him. Fred finally caught up to the cab and climbed in without being seen. He snuck into the boys suitcase and was off on an adventure.


He snuck out of the boys suitcase right before takeoff and hid into the seat pocket.  They were flying for about an hour and Fred was very bored. Than all of a sudden the plane started shaking and the pilot had lost control, people were panicking and very scared, and then the plane stopped and was on the ground. Since Fred could fly he flew out of the emergency exit door. and looked around and saw rainbows and pony's and stuff like that. When everyone came out of the plane all the happy things turned into dreadful things like a lollipop turned into a black tank and all the candy turned into turrets and they all headed for the plane. The passengers were screaming and panicking and running out of the plane and back into the plane.


Then Fred changed into a human, a police man and said to all the people to follow him. So they did sort of follow him they ran in front of him and behind him because they were still scared. Fred got really frustrated and yelled, Every body stay calm!!! They FINALLY found a cave and spent the night their, but they could not sleep because all of the rich spoiled people. They were used to sleeping on thousand dollar mattresses and not on hard rock so they complained everybody to sleep, after a LONG while.


Fred woke up first and then he woke up the others. He felt some more noticed and he felt very happy. All of the people were up and ready to go, until some of those strange tanks passed by. One of the passengers leapt on the tank and got inside and he screamed, There is no one in here!! Then he jumped out and got to cover before the tank fired a lollipop? Then the passenger looked right at the lollipop and laughed, but then the lollipop explode and he was very scared. TO BE CONTINUED...

4 comments:

  1. There needs to be a sequel to this story! You need to go check out JERRY's great adventure too!

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  2. Ha! I love how you made your piece humorous. I also liked how you made it a story but only five lines long-something funny you can read quickly. I think it would be cool if you made a sequel-what happened in Russia-during our later writing time. Keep up the good work.

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  3. That's so random Alex, but quite funny at the same time. But seriously, do you just think of something and then write it down. Your fantasy is so unpredictable. Why is the E capitalized in the be at the end? Keep up the great work Alex!

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  4. You have a really wild imagination Alex! Your story was really unique! I can't wait for this story to be finished, because it is really interesting. Keep up the good work Alex.

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